Well, I'm just very confused. I even searched for your nicks at iRO Wiki and the official forums. I found Yakubi on the official one, but just Guild Recruitment posts... And I never was active in that area XD I normally don't forget persons I talked with so this is kinda... creepy to me XD
D'aww~ Estan bellisimas ( * 7 * ) ♥! Tus habilidades en proporciones, eleccion de colores y backgroundacion (?) son exelentes! ( > w < ) !!! (aun me pregunto como hacer detalles tan pequeños como los del traje de Lunna y los del background = u =Uu )
However, the characters look very flat and 2d, like they only exist in one dimension. I think this is partly the fault of the coloring. Where normally coloring can give characters an effect that makes them look real, this looks just a little flat. Also, these girls aren't really connecting to me, which makes it look quite awkward. They look like they're meant to be friends, but they aren't even looking at each other. Lastly, I know backgrounds can be a pain in the butt to do, but they really can help your work look more finished and pleasing, even if it's just like a rolling green hill or something.